Score: 8

"1st Impression- aww crap more sprites"

submission: DBZ 8-Bit Saga Ep 5

date: 14 hours ago

I liked it alot. I'm a huge Dragon Ball and DBZ fan. This episode was so accurate and the sprites were simplistic which gave your flash video an original feel. I loved how you put the audio from the original dialogue.

I don't like the fact the fact that you did the series out of order(Yes, I stopped in the middle of this review to watch the other episodes). I was going to say it's a damn shame that your stopping right before Nappa and Vegeta show up. But you covered those fights already(without saying "Over 9000" tsk tsk).

Good job with this video, however. I look forward to your upcoming flash collab.

Score: 7

"Enjoyable"

submission: The Super Mario

date: December 21, 2009

I can tell this took a lot of time and effort. It's not a flash animation, but I know that NG is a place where users submit alot of their creative ideas. Who the heck am I to tell you that this should go on YouTube and doesn't belong on Newgrounds?

I really liked watching it. If you ever figure out how to put this custom level video as a flash game, that would be awesome. I'm sure everyone would love to play this level through a couple times.

Score: 10

"STANDING OVATION"

submission: Bleach 166

date: December 19, 2009

I saw this episode not too long ago and I must say the accuracy is uncanny. The animations of the facial expressions and body movement complimented their emotions down to a tee(sp?).

The fact that you managed to do this art work with a MOUSE is unfathomable. The small details weren't there(landscape) but I'm not gonna mark you off for it. If you were to follow this up with a tabulate, you would make jaws drop.

You have talent and if this is something you enjoy doing, I suggest that you pursue it as a career. Your talents will take you far.

Score: 6

"Constructive Criticism"

submission: A Whole New World

date: April 22, 2009

Before I pick on you I want to say you picked one of the best Disney songs to sing. I also can tell that both you and your friend are very talented singers. So the question is: What went wrong? This is a remix you made using Garageband. Voice synthesizing can be fun and you'll have a tendency to get carried away. You were a little trigger happy. When altering your voice you have to do it very tastefully. If you do it too much you'll overkill and sound like Microsoft Sam at "Open Mic Night".

Also as an unecessary plus would be to have background music- REMEMBER where you are though- all background music would have to be an orginal remix made by you. Also it might have helped your score if the song was performed by a male and female, but I understand that you wanted to include your friend. BUT, I propose that if you were to sing another song with your friend have it be a song where it isn't as obvious that you or your friend is indeed singing a female role. Example a song where your friend doesn't refer to you as Princess.(:
A
l
"Princess, when did you last let your heart decide?...."-- ---- ---- ---- ---- I

I hope I said something helpful. Alot of people just say "this sux" and expect you to be awesome next time without telling you why they thought it sucked and how to make your audio better. If this wasn't the advice you were looking for I'm sure you'll figure something out. :D

~SKSF~